Narrtive writing 2.

The unknown forest

On a sunny morning there was this boy and girl named Lorenzo and Nikki. Lorenzo had black hair and his eyes was brown, he was 17 years old and  his sister was 14 years old and she had blond hair. In their family they were the only sibling there was. They also lived in a huge castle there mum and dad was the king and queen of the Nether land. They were  one small family that lived in a castle. A man named Bradley came along and looked at them  as they were playing. Then suddenly Lorenzo asked if he wanted to play he said in a deep voice “yes please” . As they were playing they were talking and talking. Until they got exhausted  and sat down while they were sitting down Bradley asked if they wanted to hear a story Lorenzo and Nikki said “Yes Yes”In an excited way they were really excited b\Bradley said that the title was “ the unknown forest it is real” as the days and years goes past Lorenzo and Nikki grew into a  handsome man and a Beautiful girl. When they were grown there parents passed  away so they became the owners of the castle and they were really rich.   The money that Lorenzo had  spent it on a rich porsche and  upgrade the castle.Nikki spent it on her clothes. Then they wanted to go on a field trip to look for the unknown forest.As they were looking for the forest they find a secret path way and went through it. Then they find the unknown forest and said it is dangerous. While they went into the forest Lorenzo said “ stay next to me” then when he looked back Nikki was gone until Lorenzo found this light shining at him and while he was running to it he heard Nikki calling for  him so he ran to her by following her voice and found her sitting on the floor come let's go I found the way out so they ran as fast as the wind. When they got there they jump at the end finale we made it out let’s go and have  heaps of food.