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Tuesday 22 March 2016

Week 8 problems.

We are learning to do fraction and also to use division in maths. Here is a presentation of what we did.

Grammar Week 8

In writing week 8 we have been learning were to put the punctuation.Here is what have been doing in writing
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Bonded labour

In literacy my group had a task to do we had to complete a task called"Bonded labour" here is a presentation that we are working on.

Free The children.

On the term one we had a task for reading I was called "Free The children" here is what we have been doing.

Monday 14 March 2016

Week 7 problem

For week 7 we have been doing a task in maths named week 7 problems solving, here is what we have learning this week.

Friday 11 March 2016

Week 6 problems.

In week 6 we had to do a task for maths. Here is what we have been working on.

Fair Chocolate.

This week we had to do a really exciting task to do we had to learn about fair-trade company and what is chocolate made from we are learning to make inferences from what the author isn't telling, that means to look for glues that are in the text. Here is what we have been doing for this week.

Wednesday 9 March 2016

Narrative writing 3


The Adopted Boy

On a sunny day there was this boy named Junior he had grey eyes and brown hair he was short he was 12 years old ,he was at a school named Mt heart it was the smartest school in his town  . By the time School finished Junior  vanished at the class door and through the gates to his house. When he arrived his mum and dad Was talking about something that Junior couldn't hear.

They looked at him and told him to have a seat while they were talking the mum told the dad to tell him. Junior didn't know what his mum and dad was talking about so Junior said ”tell me” In a very angry voice his face was turning red .While they were having a talk a very sad thing poped up his mum said that he was adopted so Junior eyes started to fill up with emotions he started to make drama at home.


As he ran out the door he started to fill his eyes with little drops of tears and also started to ignore his mum and dad, He ran like nothing happened. While he was running he didn't know where to go so Junior thinked and thinked until he said to himself ”the park let's go to the park”.He ran as fast as he could, finale he got to the park and sat on the smooth sand he was thinking and thinking for what he has done.

A while ago a boy named Joshua came along and sat like he was angry Junior asked Joshua “ what's wrong with you”Joshua said back to Junior “ I wasn't aloud to go to the movie in the park” “should we go somewhere where it is not loud” said Junior “yes” said Joshua. As they talked and talked they started to calm down, then  Junior said “let’s go home to our parents”. Junior and Joshua ended up in a happy family they were very happy.





Friday 4 March 2016

Show don't tell.

In writing we did a task we had to show don't tell here is what we did in writing.

Tell:
1.She was so sad when she lost her dog.
2.The cake was delicious
3.The garden was beautiful.
4.It was a stormy night.
5.it was an exciting day.


Show:
1.As she knew that her eyes were going to fill up with tears she tried and tried to keep it in she was very sad . But it started to come out it came like a waterfall and cried and cried for her brown dog that couldn't stan her.


3.As I entered the bright sun out the back yard. I got bored so I looked  around, and while i was looking around a bright light was shining at my eye and it was saying to me "look at me" as I turn a colourful garden filled with flowers showed up.


4.On a cloudy day filled with plan black clouds and filled with dripping water that would wet you in second and lighting striking the floor and putting it on fire.

5.As I woke up I started to get up and never go back to sleep and will stay a wake till the end of the day. As I entered the building my mouth started to move around and never stop.

Thursday 3 March 2016

The Mt Eden mountain.

On a rainy morning there was this boy named Chad and a girl named Claren they were very close and was very talented. They called do many things like they could run 100m run in 5 min they could also climb trees and mountains.  One day They wanted to climb a mountain that is called Mt Eden it was the tallest mountain there was. So they went by running there they were wanting to have  a race. Chad said to Claren “last one there will have to clean the house when we get back” so off they went they were very fast that they banished  in a second. It was like they were running at the same flow as the wind.


The person that was nearly  at the  finish was Claren until she got exhausted so she  walked . By time she was there, Chad came out of nowhere and cross the stone before her. She was nearly there she just needed a little more fts to go but anyways it was Chad that won. They were very very exhausted it was like they were going to pass out.   finally they arrived and walked the whole way but suddenly it started to get dark. While they were walking the sky started to turn plain black. They were very terrified that they wanted to run all around the place.


They were lost in the forest where there are many bushes, so they started to call out “help us” no one answered  back. It was like it is the end of their life. They were walking and walking and still didn't found the way out so they splitted up and took each way Chad went to the Left and Claren went to the right. It was the scariest thing they been through . So they kept on walking and walking until Chad and Claren found a another way out claren found the start and Chad found the exit.

Narrtive writing 1

The haunted theme park.

One day there was a theme park  in America. The theme park’s name was Lost Land  . There was this boy named Gary he was short haired and has black hair. Then an unseen ghost came out of nowhere  and possessed the roller coaster.  The ghost that was trying to scare Gary was named Bloody man, he had red hair and his skin was red and had  black stripes on his face . When Gary arrived at the roller coaster, there was something wrong with the roller coaster it couldn't work. When the rides were going he saw something in the distance he rang the police and they nevered picked up so he rang his friend and said “help there is something around this theme park” as he was talking the ghost got closer and closer so he kept on talking and his phone died on full charge, so he was sure that it was a ghost that was in the distance he was getting very sacred and started to run around the theme park wherever he went there was something in the distance so he kept on running until he got exhausted and bend over and took a break he was very scared that he couldn't stop. As he was taking a break the ghost was getting very close so he was sick of running and just wait for the ghost to come. When the ghost finally got there bloody man was about to push him of the edge of the deck into the water full of sharks.  And finally his friend turned up and sucked the ghost up in his hand made machine. As Gary raised he held his  hand out  said”your next” in a creepy way but he was just joking.

Narrtive writing 2.

The unknown forest

On a sunny morning there was this boy and girl named Lorenzo and Nikki. Lorenzo had black hair and his eyes was brown, he was 17 years old and  his sister was 14 years old and she had blond hair. In their family they were the only sibling there was. They also lived in a huge castle there mum and dad was the king and queen of the Nether land. They were  one small family that lived in a castle. A man named Bradley came along and looked at them  as they were playing. Then suddenly Lorenzo asked if he wanted to play he said in a deep voice “yes please” . As they were playing they were talking and talking. Until they got exhausted  and sat down while they were sitting down Bradley asked if they wanted to hear a story Lorenzo and Nikki said “Yes Yes”In an excited way they were really excited b\Bradley said that the title was “ the unknown forest it is real” as the days and years goes past Lorenzo and Nikki grew into a  handsome man and a Beautiful girl. When they were grown there parents passed  away so they became the owners of the castle and they were really rich.   The money that Lorenzo had  spent it on a rich porsche and  upgrade the castle.Nikki spent it on her clothes. Then they wanted to go on a field trip to look for the unknown forest.As they were looking for the forest they find a secret path way and went through it. Then they find the unknown forest and said it is dangerous. While they went into the forest Lorenzo said “ stay next to me” then when he looked back Nikki was gone until Lorenzo found this light shining at him and while he was running to it he heard Nikki calling for  him so he ran to her by following her voice and found her sitting on the floor come let's go I found the way out so they ran as fast as the wind. When they got there they jump at the end finale we made it out let’s go and have  heaps of food.

Wednesday 2 March 2016

Promise

In reading week 4 term 1 we have been reading a text called "promise" it has many information how to survie  a frozen blast. But also it is made with a story.

Marcus Thomas.

In reading we had a great reading task to do it was called "Marcus Thomas". It was about a man that goes caving and other things. Here is what my group have been doing.

Tuesday 1 March 2016

Pay Day.

In reading we had a task to do we had to read this book called " pay day" here is what the Roald Dahl's  and Dr Suess have been doing this week for reading.