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Wednesday 9 March 2016

Narrative writing 3


The Adopted Boy

On a sunny day there was this boy named Junior he had grey eyes and brown hair he was short he was 12 years old ,he was at a school named Mt heart it was the smartest school in his town  . By the time School finished Junior  vanished at the class door and through the gates to his house. When he arrived his mum and dad Was talking about something that Junior couldn't hear.

They looked at him and told him to have a seat while they were talking the mum told the dad to tell him. Junior didn't know what his mum and dad was talking about so Junior said ”tell me” In a very angry voice his face was turning red .While they were having a talk a very sad thing poped up his mum said that he was adopted so Junior eyes started to fill up with emotions he started to make drama at home.


As he ran out the door he started to fill his eyes with little drops of tears and also started to ignore his mum and dad, He ran like nothing happened. While he was running he didn't know where to go so Junior thinked and thinked until he said to himself ”the park let's go to the park”.He ran as fast as he could, finale he got to the park and sat on the smooth sand he was thinking and thinking for what he has done.

A while ago a boy named Joshua came along and sat like he was angry Junior asked Joshua “ what's wrong with you”Joshua said back to Junior “ I wasn't aloud to go to the movie in the park” “should we go somewhere where it is not loud” said Junior “yes” said Joshua. As they talked and talked they started to calm down, then  Junior said “let’s go home to our parents”. Junior and Joshua ended up in a happy family they were very happy.





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