once there live a ARCO named nick. he was a very hungry ARCO and he saw a group of emperor penguin so he said “i am hungry “ to his self so he wanted to eat them but he wanted some friends to play with him .So he went to look for other penguin so he went to get some other penguin to eat .
then he came back to play with them but he was still hungry then he went to find more penguin s so he went to find some . But he didn't found some penguin’s so he went to get some fish in the cold icy water.
then he went back to his friend to play . then went play with them but the emperor penguins so they ran away then he said “i won’t hurt you “ he said so they came back to play with him .
Hi Ben,
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