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Tuesday 25 June 2013

Jack and the Free Juice

Once there was a boy named jack and his friend was Luke. luke called him to come with him and jack saw free juice. Jack saw some children stealing some juice then jack got one and ran away. Then they went to the back of school so that they could drink there drink. But jack didnt want to drink his drink because he thought that it is the wrong thing to do. so he went to put it in his bag then he came out . To play with luke.

1 comment:

  1. You started so well with your retelling but then you forgot then end of the story and how the problem was resolved.

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