My mum
My mum takes care of us and she always takes us to school. She likes to play slots she like coffee and she smokes . Her favourite tv show is cook island dance group . She is in a cook island group my mum is the head guda of the cook island group . My mum always makes our launch.My mum works at to schools she works at ptengland school and apii potitki kindy garden .She gives us lots of money to take to school .
My aunty
My aunt takes care of us when we are at her house. sometimes I call her aunty mama . She always buy us things that we don’t got also she lets us go out to the shop and buy us somethings like lollies and other staff. She takes me and my cousin to warehouse to buy us games and skylander’s she likes to drink and smoke.
I have 4 thing to change my writing to move to year 6.
ReplyDelete1.My sentence don't make sense.
2.Full stops and capital letters for sentences with only 1 idea in them.
3.Complex detailed sentences as well as simple sentences.
4. Juicy words.