Creative spring writing.

Today in class we have been doing creative writing. We had to write a sentence about this picture. As a class we chose the sentence we likes the best and then add to it. here is my sentence and sentence I add to.




before:
Under the oak tree,kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light  on you.:l

after:
Under the oak tree, kicked back by the beach from a view  , chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you. I lay down relaxing by the tree . Then it was time to end  relaxing by the tree.