once there was a man named maui and this sun was going to fast and maui and his brothers couldn’t see what they were eating so they went to make some ropes out of
flakes so they can slow the sun down . after that they had to hide away from the sun .When the sun rose they jump out and pulled the rope and maui beaten the sun up .So the sun said “stop i am going to die” so maui said”let him go he’s going to slow down “ so they lived happy ever after.
Good effort retelling Ben. You've forgotten to put capital letters in the right places but you've written the main ideas of the story. Why do you think the sun was rushing across the sky?
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